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As the young blond traced small details onto her map, she wiped a bit of sweat from her brow. For early fall, it sure was hot... Or perhaps that was just the heat of the furnace getting to her? Sighing, Fleet dropped her quill and stood up, dragging her hand through her short, fluffy hair. The day had been long, and the evidence of this was all over her body- Dirty clothes, a small smudge of coal dust on her left cheek... Not to mention the fact that her hands were stained with ink. But all the dirt, all of that dust had been worth it. It was always worth it. Sitting back down again, she didn't even notice the sun setting as she her mind floated in the lala land that most refer to as reverie. Nor did she notice the tall shadow striding towards her house, a diamond block in hand.

No, Fleet was far too lost in her thoughts to even realize that she'd left the door open. Too busy thinking about how she dove down into that cave everyday, and always hauled back such a huge load. Today was the day she'd actually done something a little different. Fleet had traveled far in order to find a new cave, and add to her map. The thought of fresh air just seemed great, really. And it was- Until she'd seen that tall ass stilty creature running around with a sand block in it's hand. She didn't even know how lucky she was that it hadn't noticed that she'd seen it... Or so she thought. She'd taken off too soon to even pay attention to what it was, dropping the diamond block she'd just crafted in the process. That had absolutely sucked. There were so many things she could've done with that diamond...

Fleet leaned back in her chair, letting out a yawn that turned into a startled yelp as the door slammed, jumping up a little. The jump caused her chair to scoot back a little and then fall over. Her eyes widened as the shadow creature from before stared down at her, just... Staring back. Both were frozen. The Enderman because it was being stared at, and the human because she was scared as NETHER. This fear spiked as Fleet's eyes drifted to the diamond block it was holding. She recognized that block. Did this thing follow her? She looked back at the Enderman, letting out yet another yelp as it seemed to have gotten closer, leaned in closer. Why in the Nether had it followed her all that way? And more importantly, it seemed hostile. Kinda. So if it was following her that whole way, it would've had a chance to kill her any time it wanted.

So, why didn't it? As she continued staring at the creature, she shuddered. That whispering... It was terrifying. Like listening to a ghost or something. Maybe it was a ghost? Gulping, she struggled not to blink. And failed. The Enderman took this chance to kneel down and lean in closer, it's long, gangly limbs dragging on the floor for quite a length. When Fleet opened her eyes again, she wasn't surprised that it was closer... But she still whimpered anyway. Was she going to die today? So, lying there upside down with her feet in the air, she was going to die. Sitting in a chair upside down. Whatever happened to creepers just exploding and sending your limbs flying? Or being arrowed to death? Since when did monsters act so personal when they killed you? Questions like these flooded the teen's mind as her heart pounded...

It was an interesting thing, being terrified. It was almost like being in love. Your heart felt like it was gonna explode in your chest, your emotions ran rampant, you felt like you were about to cry, and you're afraid to speak. They both sent adrenaline pumping through your veins. Was there really even a difference? The Enderman stared down at her, vaguely wondering when the girl was gonna give him a chance to move again. He didn't have long to wait- She shut her eyes to squeeze the tears away. He moved in closer, closer... Until his face was an inch from hers. Her eyes popped open, and the tears began to flow. Why keep from crying? She was going to die anyway... Maybe it was best to let her tear ducts have their way?

Unable to move, the Enderman merely stared at her with his glowing green eyes. The air felt tight. Fleet knew that if she closed her eyes one more time, she would die immediately. It would eat her, or something. The Enderman, of course, had other plans. Not that Fleet knew anything about them. In her pocket, her clock ticked. Her heart beat erratically when compared to the ticking. Ticking, thumping, inaudible whispers. Each second of it seemed to last an hour. Her eyes began to feel dry, and the tears made her eyelids feel a little crusty.

Just one blink, it would make it better... Wouldn't it? But just one blink... And she'd die, wouldn't she? But it didn't matter. No matter what, she'd die. It wasn't like she could attack... If she moved her gaze from this strange, tall shadow for even a second to pull out her sword, she'd still die. Fleet's eyelids began to droop, and the Enderman's eyes brightened a little. Suddenly, the girl was just... So... Tired. She just wanted to shut her eyes. There was nothing she could do now. No matter what, if she moved her eyes from the gangly beast at all, she'd die. Quietly, one last tear slipped from her left eye as they both closed for what she thought was forever.
Inspired by Minecraft's Enderman, obviously. xD
There will be two alternate endings to this. One is based on how a Herobrine and a creeper are made. :3
However, I'll take requests for endings... So I'll upload all ending requests. :3
God, I'm so uncreative with names. This Fleet is in no way related to my Ribbon Eel Girl Fleet. xD
Ending- Gone Forever [link]
Alternate Ending- Pity the Taken [link]
Romance Ending- Didn't mean to scare you, oops [link]

I love R&R~ It brings improvement, I think. :3
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wasisgoingonhere Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Aww i really love this story >w<
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
<3
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elenaaaaaaaa Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2013
Maybe at the end of the story the enderman should kiss her...
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013
Check the romance ending. ;D
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ZakurotheEndergodess Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013   Artist
OMG THIS IS PERFECT!
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013
Meep >///<
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PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
STILL LOVE THIS STORY.
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
Really? x3
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:iconpascalofpiers:
PascalOfPiers Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013
YUS. I KEEP COMING BACK.
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013
Hehehe <3
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Machdraco22 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
O_O, It matches what I think, getting back from a dig. Going to the house. And seeing it standing there holding my stuff.
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
XD Lol
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davidtennantrocks Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
sorry........ i just like oops.... less violent. i know how to write but everytime i try downloading my writings its not the right type of file, did you use something on deviant art to write this?
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Nope, I just copy/pasted what I wrote into the screen that pops up when you click the Add Text button.
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davidtennantrocks Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
how exactly do you post these writings? cuz i want to write fanfics too. and i liked The oops, didn't mean to scare you ending best. the Gone Forever ending wasn't needed... still, how to write these?
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2012
Um.
Gone Forever is my favorite ending, no offense. It's actually the canon ending, the rest are all things people requested.
I'm not sure how to tell someone else to write.
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Feathers-love Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Just got done reading all of the endings....

BRAVO WOMAN!!! :iconbravoplz: Bravo!
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Omg lol I think I'm blushing. XD Thank you very much! ^w^
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Feathers-love Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Awww! :3 You're so very welcome then!! :D
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
<3
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thorn333 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Maybe one werewolf themed where she get's bitten and turns into a... (insert your creativity)
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
That'd be a little awkward, but okay, I guess. It'll be a long time, though. :P
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thorn333 Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Sorry, and I hope this doesn't take up to much of your time. Huge fan of your work!
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
Oh, that's very sweet of you. Oh, and don't be sorry. :3 Haha, it's just finals week and all, so meh
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thorn333 Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Okay, :iconkittyfaceplz:
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:iconwolfy-of-ebil:
wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
<3
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littleottsel Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Creepy...
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2012
:3
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unoriginaI Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh :D
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gresh8980 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
I would've liked an ending where Fleet is killed... not in as a gruesome way as in Gone Forever with the.... face carving and all.... but what about a sudden pain in her chest, she looks down, and looks up. She stares at the Enderman until she dies. She wakes up on a sandy beach, goes to her house, and found the Enderman had gone, and her dead body was still there. She picks up the tools from her dead body, which vanishes, and she decides to craft a bed and before she goes to bed, she tries to put her items in her chest. She suddenly notices something strange in the empty chest next to her bed. There was a diamond block in her chest. When she picked it up, it was strangely heavier than a diamond block. She cracked it open like a peanut and found a small Ender Pearl inside....
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Well, that's interesting. I'm not quite understanding this, though. Does she turn into an Enderman or something..? XD
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gresh8980 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
God dammit I meant to spell stabbed.
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gresh8980 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
She 'respawns', like in Minecraft when you die. She never died in the Minecraft world and has to get used to it I guess. I forgot to put in that the Enderman stapped Fleet with his claws, I fail.
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Well, this story's suppose to have a bit of realistic-ness to it. I'm not sure how I could do that... Naturally? XD
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gresh8980 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Well, I often fail at realism. I kinda like the stories that mix the idea of real life and the games stories are based on. For example, there is one story here on Deviantart that said when some guy leaned against a tree in the Minecraft universe and found that it's bark was soft. He punched it, and it didn't hurt. The tree blocks floated in the air, which he couldn't explain. The story said at night, he dug himself into the ground. The story said the dirt came out in large cube-shaped clumps and it showed the... flawed timing of Minecraft's day/night cycle, et cetera, et cetera. I guess Fleet would respawn, and not remember a thing other than her name, she would find and go into her old house with a mysterious bloody pool on the floor next to a small group of miniature pickaxes and armor pieces. She picks them up and regains her memory of the diamond block, which she finds in her old chest.
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
Uh, this would have to be a maybe. I may or me not accept this type of ending... I tend to have problems putting things like this into context.
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crazydude159 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2012  Student Artist
Gone forever ending: true ending (In my opinion)
Alternate ending: History and secrets of mobs.
Romance ending:Saw that one coming, lol.
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012
Lol, I think I like the Gone Forever the best too. :3 I'm assuming that was your favorite?
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crazydude159 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2012  Student Artist
My second, i don't like too much blood and gore
I like the alternate ending better.
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2012
Lol, the one with the history of mobs? That one was interesting~ Did you read the comic that inspired it? :3
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crazydude159 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2012  Student Artist
yes, it's not deep but it's give me a few idea though.
It's on DA (here) somewhere, search around, maybe you'll find it.
And it's kinda explain the minecraft mobs behavior.
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2012
Oh, cool, I'll check it out~
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crazydude159 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2012  Student Artist
yea, you should.
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Creeper-Wants-Hug Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
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Most awesome hisory evar! PART 2 NOW!!!
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011
xD I've got two endings to finish. There are already two. :3
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Creeper-Wants-Hug Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
Yayz ^^
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2012
^w^
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Akumamika Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I was holding my breath reading this bloody awsome! owo could chu maybe do a romantic y ending? would be kinda awsome hehe
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wolfy-of-ebil Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2011
Actually, I have a request for one. :3 I'm working on both it and the one where Fleet is saved. xD
Thank you for saying it's awesome. xD
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Akumamika Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
not at all It is awsome :3 keep itup man
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